Scene 1: Longer pan shot starting at the bottom of the bed.  
John: You are the tastiest thing I have had since last night. 
 
 
Scene 2: After John closes the box containing the engagement ring, there's a bit more. 
John: Well, if were meant to be together, we'll be together.   
Alix: I love you.  
John: I love you.  (rolls back and they start kissing again)  
John: (US) (rolls off his bed in the Moya) 
(The scene continues, and John gets tossed around the room a few times -- wearing only his underwear)  
 
 
Scene 3: Just after the intro credits, when they're all still at the surface outside the temple.  
Tahleen: (US) You'll soon forget this toxic surface. 
John: Toxic - that figures.  
(Aeryn looks around suspiciously, and stares at old priest/Tuzak) 
 
 
Scene 4: At the squid pool.  More stuff mixed in and out of stuff seen in the US. 
John: (US) Total nutrition.  What's not to like? 
Aeryn: (looking around)  This place... these people... their "serenity". 
John: [I don't know.  At] least you've still got your position, Aeryn. 
Aeryn: (US) It amazes me how people mistake theosophy for superiority. 
John: You know - I don't think anything amazes you.   
(Note:  this shows John speaking here, but in US version we get him saying it as a voice over while seeing his back from Zhaan's POV)  
John: (he grabs one of the squid-things) I mean, look at this.  You ever seen one of these before? 
(Aeryn gives him a supremely disinterested look) 
John: What would you call this?  I dub thee "trigopod"!  What? No... no, no reaction from you?  (he drops it) 
Aeryn: Incredible!  How special! - They're a food source, John. 
John: No, Aeryn.  It's unique.  It's a squid-calamari-cucumber, and, and it is incredible. 
John: (US) Look up, look at this - this is a ship, Aeryn, and it's incredible... it's also a little creepy. 
(Tahleen starts speaking to Zhaan (US) and we see the shot of John's back - see note above.) 
John: Okay, almost everything we see almost everyday is brand new to both of us.  It's worthy of a response. 
(Aeryn makes a face and purses mouth) 
John: On the other hand, it is a little creepy. 
(Aeryn nods head emphatically, smiles slightly. John grabs another squid and it goes into the scene with Tahleen messing with John's memories) 
 
 
Scene 5: Just after Aeryn gets kicked out of the temple, we see Asgal walk down the steps and meet up with Lorana.  
Hesgal: This is wrong, Luranna.  We are far outside our vows. 
Lorana: What choice do we have, Hesgal? 
Hesgal: That is Tahleen talking, not you.  Don't be blinded by her madness. 
Lorana: I pity you your jealousy.  Tahleen and I share Unity now - not you and I. Accept that and move on. 
(Hesgal sighs. Lorana stalks off, leaving a very annoyed Hesgal behind) 
 
 
Scene 6: The scene where Zhaan kills her former lover, Bitaal.  It starts earlier, and adds a bit. 
Zhaan: In the fires of [the touch] I search for Unity with you, my companion. 
Bitaal: Ah, magnificent Zhaan.  
Bitaal: (US) Ease the burdens of my flesh with your soul.  Envelop me. 
Zhaan: (US)Release your mind, 
Zhaan: Bitaal. 
Zhaan: (US)Surrender your demons for I have others to replace them. 
 
 
Scene 7: A bit later 
Zhaan: (US) Avenging the lives you have ruined. 
Bitaal: (US) Argh!  Zhaan! 
Zhaan: The world you put at risk. 
 
 
Scene 8: When John confronts Zhaan just after her session of "Unity" with Tahleen, and her eyes have just turned red.  
Zhaan: (US) I don't have the strength to start over again. 
John: No, just... just stay put.  Stay put. We're not done yet. 
(He goes off to find Tahleen) 
 
 
Scene 9: At the end of the scene when Tahleen orders Lorana and Hesgal to do whatever it takes to keep Zhaan on the planet. 
Tahleen: (US) I didn't get enough to quell the madness. (stalks off) 
Hesgal: (moves over next to Luranna)  She will forge another Unity with Zhaan, and most likely kill her in the process. 
(He stalks off. Lorana looks torn) 
 
 
Scene 10: In the last scene with Lorana really turning on the brain-twisting effect on John to get his attention away from Zhaan. 
Alix: (US) When do I become more important than Zhaan?(holds up hand with wedding band)  
John: (US) I never gave you that. 
(Scene switches back to the bedroom scene from start of show) 
John: (kissing, but Alix isn't kissing back) What's wrong? 
Alix: I'm scared.  
John: (continues kissing her chest and moving down her body)  Hah, like you're scared.  What?  
Alix: Well, when I agreed to pass on Stanford, and go with you... What if things don't work out between us, and I'm stuck in Florida alone?  
John: You will never (kiss) ever (kiss) be stuck alone.  I promise. 
Alix: Now how am I going to hold you to that one?  
John: (chuckles, reaches down, grabs the ring and puts it on her chest)  Alexandra Kimberly Conner...  
John: (US) ... marry me?  
 
 
Scene 11: A couple of extra lines in the scene with Zhaan lying with her head resting on Tuzak's dead body.  Zhaan's just revealed she plans to kill Tahleen. 
John: (US) Just like you did your lover. 
Zhaan: You were always the most clever one on Moya, but I will not miss you. 
John: Zhaan... Zhaan, just stop.  Stop thinking about Tahleen.  I want you to start thinking about yourself for a little while. 
Zhaan: (US) The urge to give retribution is intoxicating. 
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